Back in May, I attended the funeral of my grandad. The
service was a thanksgiving for, and celebration of, the life of a well-loved
man. He, like the majority of my family, had a strong Christian faith and there
was a powerful sense of shared hope for a heavenly consolation as a packed
church congregation sang together throughout the service.
Certain lines from the hymns stood out to me, and I hope to
be able to write poems that echo them:
Drop thy still dews of quietness,
till all our strivings cease…
Mine is the sunlight
Mine is the morning
I looked to Jesus, and I found
In Him my Star, my Sun;
And in that Light of Life I’ll walk
Till trav’lling days are done.
This post was begun soon after the event, but I didn’t
manage to finish it at the time. For many reasons – some of which I will blog
about another time. But one reason was because of a poem I wrote for my Grandma
about my Grandad. I gave it to her at the funeral. I believe she got it printed
in that Sunday’s edition of Pew News,
the notice bulletin handed out at her church. But it felt a bit too soon to go
more ‘public’ with it (that is, pretending the readership of this blog extends
further than my immediate family…).
Except…
The week after the funeral, I entered the poem in a poetry
competition. In fact, it had been written to conform specifically to the
exacting demands of the competition – an 821 poem, which has an initial stanza
of 8 lines, followed by a couplet and ending with a single line, which should
also contain a volta or ‘twist’ of
some kind. The organisers also stated (as most competitions/publishers do) that
the work must not have been published anywhere before, including on a personal
blog. Luckily, my offering was met with a polite ‘no’ from the competition,
which means that I can put it on here.
So, although it feels a bit morally ambiguous that I wrote a
poem that was simultaneously for my Grandma as she mourns her husband, and also
an entry for a competition, it is also my tribute to my Grandad.
Heritage
My grandad, with his northern vowels,
‘Let’s ‘av a luke’, ‘bring me that buke’.
Child-me thrilled at the way he spoke.
My grandad, on his daily strolls
‘cross Cookham Moor to the churchyard.
My grandad, the musical lad:
church organist, and taught my dad.
Now my sons caress the keyboard.
My grandad, who made pilgrimage,
and brought back stones from Galilee,
has come into his heritage.
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